You are a true modern Bard and your poetry style is unlike anything I have ever read before - it would be unfair to compare you to any famous poets because you are unique and to be honest your work is so much better.
The way you've used enjambement in this is really clever and it feels so personal...
~Ben

Very nice job here. The emotion is presented well. Keep up the good work. ^^

~Unknown Survivor~

it's a touching story.

Hah, I never knew that the linguistics department just added another technique to their persuation repertoire- yelling with marbles... hm.. (!)

No good deed goes unpunished...

Loved it! The words just flow, almost like a song without music.