It's kinda hard to follow, but it's still really good. (well, duh. you wrote it) And sad. It is well written in the way that most of what you learn about the characters are from dialogue or mini thought bubbles that were worded like dialogue. And the ending ._. uff.
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This made my heart hurt.
Which I guess means you're a really gifted writer.

This was beautiful and very sad. I was almost crying, and I mean almost. I just didn't expect the twist at the end.

tht was a beautiful little tale T.T

Omg this is not okay! I love your writing, but the last Mark and Sandy sory made me sad, so I wanted to read something happier before I went to sleep, but this made me cry! :(

Stint get me wrong, you're a brilliant writer, and I will retread this when I can appreciate the heart-wrenching amazing ness of it later, but for now I'm gonna just run away and cry and find something happier to read.

This is sort of like the weirdest thing I've ever read, but I like it XD

Cheers

You made me tear up D: Good job. It was truly a sweet story. I love Limp and Scar 3

That was really beautiful. Short, but everything that needed to be said was.

I like how you developed the story using lots of questions and short sentences. It was very effective.

But what was with that part at the end? After the boy died, who is speaking? I don't really understand what they're saying...

It actually hurts... You have a real gift in creating these characters and lifes. It's art. One simple line und there is someone or something. Love it.

:[ I gotta say, that was a genius story...So irritating though about the death...

Loved it.

This story was strange...a good strange...

At the end of it I wasn't sure if I was sad or not.

I seemed morbid at the end too.

It was all like "blah blah blah happy-go lucky...and then he died."

I cried.

And cried.

And cried for this. :(

It was so sad.

I loved how you repeated it at the end too. Man, I read this over a million times. First, my eyes watered. The next few times, my heart hurted. And then I was crying. :(

It was so cute. Even though we knew more about Limp than Scar, the narrator. Haha.

It was cute.

In a sad way.

Thanks. :)

I'm ready to complain that this story is too short when I suddenly realize that good stories aren't necessarily long. I love this story because of its vividness, and I feel as though I've overheard an interesting conversation, yeah.

holyfreakingmotherofgod I'm crying so hard after reading that, well I'm trying my best not to because my room mate wants to watch a movie after this, I hope its a sad one so I can cry through it but oh my god. Really.

Its beautiful. No seriously, its an odd way to describe a story like that, but some how I think tragedies have a certain beauty to them. That sounds stupid though be I don't care because yeah.

Wow.

So amazing.

Thankyou for the great read! xo