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that's so..
so sad..
I don't even know his name..
AH.
WHY.

It's astoundingly beautiful but I'm a little confused about the ending. Could you please explain it to me?

I just made an account and now I'm going around favoring the stories that stuck out to me before I had one. Best oneshot.Ever.

That story was so good, but almost unbearably sudden. But that's what makes it so rememberable and unique! I thought the near-silent main was also a good touch, it made them contrast really well. This is really one of the best one shots i've ever read.

Awh, this was terribly sad but very good. Wonderful job!

Well that was a punch in the gut. @_@ Sad, but adorable.

why do you torture me so?

T_T
oh that was so sad.

it was insanely cute though.

This brought me to tears.
:'(

I can really see this being made into a short(really really short) indie movie.

It was depressing, bittersweet, cute, sad, heart wrenching, perfect.

Great Job! :)

god, that was so depressing, but so good.

oh man.
that was really good.
:)
horrible. gets down deep. but it was really good.

That was amazing... and so sad. I'm startng to tear up :_(
I like the way you wrote this, how it describes things through the dialog and how it doesn't get too stuck in describing every single detail. I just gets the point across and really lets you feel the emotion and what's going on. Anyways, awesome fic. I may have to stalk through your other works now :)

fuwa...almost cried, it's so sad yet so cute! i really liked Limp's dialogue, great writing style.

I dont get it at the end when he's at the funeral thing and starts talking to himself :o EXPLAIN?