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| Leaving Here 2008-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseoh man. that was really good. :) horrible. gets down deep. but it was really good. |
| Rainshock51 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing... and so sad. I'm startng to tear up :_( I like the way you wrote this, how it describes things through the dialog and how it doesn't get too stuck in describing every single detail. I just gets the point across and really lets you feel the emotion and what's going on. Anyways, awesome fic. I may have to stalk through your other works now :) |
| orangesandmoons 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abusefuwa...almost cried, it's so sad yet so cute! i really liked Limp's dialogue, great writing style. |
| EllYouSeeWhy 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseI dont get it at the end when he's at the funeral thing and starts talking to himself :o EXPLAIN? |
| Erisah Mae 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseNearly made me cry. Your style is deceptively simple, and yet you still write characters that are easy to fall in love with. If it didn't have such a tragic ending, I would have called this cute, as it is, the bittersweetness is extremely well executed. nice work. Erisah |
| Saral Hylor 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseI honestly don't know how you do it. Even your short stories are enough to make me want to cry, and then slap you for being so good. Yes, this story made me want to cry, pathetic, I know, but it was horrid. horrible, horrible evil man... now I want to push him down the stairs. ~Saral |
| suicide girls and death boy... 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abusethat was great it made me cry a little going on my favs |
| random-nerd15 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseomg that was so cute! but extrememly sad...wow i love this so much i'm going to add it to my favorites :D |
| Radio Saturday 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is an interesting piece. I admire your subtlety -- a story like this could so easily have degenerated into some hideous mutant splatterpunk-slash-fantasy monstrosity, and you never did that. You left it up to the imagination, and while what was happening could have been made a little more plain, I really think you've taken the right path here. Nice work! |
| Casey.Duh 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseOh my god. I was all fine and not sad or a bit teary until the end. Then my eyes started to water and I was all, "Aww, that's soo sad!" |
| jono 2007-09-13 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha that cheered me up. though i can't fathom why. i like how annoying he is, the way he talks so much... |
| DANCE.PARTY.TRAGEDY 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseAw. I loved this. |
| SerialXLain 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseI can't believe you killed him, you **! (Just kiddng about the ** part. ;-;) I'm crying. xD I loved him... It was great... I found myself reading it in a rush because of how he talked. xD And I like how you brought back the things in the end... *sigh* *favorites* xo |
| Cracked Butterfruit 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseOh it made my heart cry so much. The style is really effective and last line "Of course it's okay. I love you." that made me sob ;_; Beautiful writing :)) |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseD: Killing their own son. God, that's terrible. Your style was really effective. Loved it. |