you have not posted in 4 months! i need my SIBL! NOW!

I was wondering when you're going to update?

Charley's so adorable. Mariner-Monday...great idea! I like the fact the plots obviously moving on now and am intrigued to see where you go with it. Giving characters really a hard time is just too tempting isn't it?

Bad, bad Lana - skipping schools very bad (not that we all haven't done it, I won't say anything if you don't.) I quite like Tracy too she seems manipulative and bitchy. Just the way I like my girls :) Still has nothing on Charley though.
And Lana the emo girl looking happy! OM-FUCKING-G (I've never said that before in my life!) Maybe it was because of Tracey...Lana and Tracey...I’ll leave that though hanging. I'm also interested to see how the Riley thing pans out and what he has o do with the plot. Him and Sam...Um, maybe if he has a bit of a personality adjustment. Sorry if I’m now just pairing off random characters now. :)

All in all - another great instalment.

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PS- Nine Inch Nails are my fourth favourite band so glad you included some lyrics from them too.

... That's it? xD Where the hell is this going? Haha. So unpredictable, I guess the only problem we can see so far is Tracy tricking Lana and Lana's kidney transplant acting up.
I'm guessing Charley was hinting at the fact that her brother was gay in her own weird way... so maybe that's the slash relationship right? Or maybe I'm completely wrong. I'll just have to wait and see then...
Surprisingly I've never listened to a song by Nine Inch Nails. xD I know that came out of nowhere. But yeah, I haven't. =]

yay you are back! heehee

so so happy. awesome story revived once again...

to the point that i think wo ai ni. which is chinese. haha

I love Charley...

I love her like whoa.

That is pretty much the end of the review.

I love Sam too but I love Charley a little bit more.

Oh, yay, it's back! XD I sense much drama in the near future!

ah, haha. I'm in love with Charley. I'm completely huh? about Riley. Sam's such a fierce bitch. And poor Lana. Bah, little sheep. BAH!

haha, I really like where this story seems to be heading, with Tracy being the Mean Girl taking Lana under her wing just to socially sacrifice her.

Sam+Charley= love. They're my favorite platonice pairing since ever.

Keep me posted!

Your dialogue seems so natural in this one, me likes it.
Oh, and Cahrley is a fantastic character- her attitude is written really well- she's not quite as whiny as female characters seem to be in most slash fiction.
Hope you update soonishlike, please!
And hah. Lobster potential. Is that where this is heading? huh? m.
- Sy

WELCOME BACK. i like this story so far. uh. this review sucks, but i'm going to bed. i just happened to check fp before bed. oi. updates are great.

Hey Luci. Still there?

So I really like this story so far, particularly the characters of Sam and Charley. Charley lol, I wish I had a friend as cool as her.

But I'm mostly interested to see where this is going. There's quite the warning in the summary (don't ever change!) and already there's a lot of possibilities. I have a bad feeling that Lana's going to get sick/die, and you just know that something sadistic/hot’s gonna happen to Sam.

Long live Charley *insert surname*!

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will be waiting for an update! It's lovely so far.

I love Charley. She's the most amazing character ever.

Write more!

OMG this was so cute heehee

more.!

aw, too cute...love charlie