FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| A-Starr1691 2008-02-06 ch 3,  | abuseThis was great! I gotta know whats gonna happen 2 Mar and Tar. This should get really interesting. Love it, its on myfav. |
| KrodanKradAeron 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abusenoice :P |
| Lost and No One Cares 2007-11-04 ch 3, | abuseReally good story so far. Continue updating, I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Enigmatic Margaret 2007-10-30 ch 2, | abuseHAhaha.. break time.. and what do I get? An update! Love it. Interesting.. fav line: "I'll wait until you're legal' haha. Nice. Marissa's a tad paranoid.. but yeah still waiting for the good reason. Luke's a sweety.. minus the names haha. 21 huh? Why do I find his age hot? Gah, I better get back to analysing chic lit. Woop. :) |
| Enigmatic Margaret 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseGah too true you DO have another story out that needs your attention, but this one is already interesting! Pfft, don't worry about it... just continue to spew out all the stories you want! It's more fun when you have more than one, two or even three voices in your head at once, you almost feel like you have a town of people yelling at you from inside your brain. That's not crazy at all! Marissa's attitude already has me rooting for her, and Luke is... *giggles* well like you know... whatever. This little plot bunny is good and hopefully will develop into the Rabbit we want to to! I want to know why Marissa thinks men are assholes. I like theire interaction already, nice set up. Have I already said 'liking it already?' well if not.. just did! Enig. |
| FallenHeroYuudai 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseAn alter ego of myself awesome! I love love love Marissa she is the best ever! And coincidently we have the same name! But am I like her in real life hell no I just wish at times I was! |
| Epiff Annie 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI'm the friend you showed it to! I feel so special. I loved it, of course. I've already told you I love the characters, but I can't help gushing about Marissa. I mean, you make the hottest guys, but your main female is always the best. Funny as hell, strong-minded, and totally unique, but REAL. I especially adored the beginning. It pulls you right in, I love when stories do that. I've tried it before. Yeah, didn't work too well. Update soon! |
| Veiled In A Dream 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseVery cool...Marissa Charleston is a VERY interesting character...loving a person...she doesn't love him...cute...I know THAT feeling...keep this up. |