| Reviews for Picture Perfect |
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Vigilant 10/12/07 . chapter 1You seem to be inspired by tragedy in a way that a lot of people don't write about. It makes your writing somewhat unique, and in turn, interesting. I rarely see the story from the title, well done. Also, I quite enjoyed the phrase "they had never seen the sadness behind her smile." As I've observed in a number of you writings now, you take things that people often are too preoccupied to note, and point them out. |
Artemis Anderson 9/16/07 . chapter 1Wow...I liked this one. And I liked the way you bolded the letters to say "Why me" and "she cries". Excellent. |
Mrstress 7/18/07 . chapter 1I like this poem... sadly enough, it's very true in a lot of situations. Keep writing! |