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| blueroseofice 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseYou did a really good job on this one! The only thing is the first verse says hates, fears, and feels, you left out feels but that also would have made it a bit to long so, other than that i don't have any critisims : ) |
| soccerfreak18 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abusevery good. are you talking about the same person or 2 different people? could be both but i really like the repition great job |
| The Only Tai 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseM. Great. I really adore how you used repetition in this poem. It really made it an interesting read. |
| Falcon0Rider 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseOh, I really like the way this is written, with the repitition and all. It really pushes the words at you, if that makes sense, and makes you listen. Very good. Falcon |