Food Poetry = yum-tastic! XD

gorgeous.

you remind me of regina spektor.

and a bit of charles budowski.

The interesting thing about both chapters of this poem is that the phrases you use such as "yeah, i love the way/you close your eyes/and sigh deep like you're/used to releasing things" are super suggestive, whether or not they're meant to be. Notwithstanding, these are both passionate, filled with desire, and leave me with thoughts reminiscent of my own experiences with beautiful boys.

wow, just gorgeous. you have a real way with words and you managed to say a lot with very few.

have you seen the movie by the same name as your title? I love it. the word play is just wonderful.

the comparison is mind-bogglingly crazy.
i am now officially infatuated with this one!

Interesting comparision! I love food similies =P It makes it really easy to understand what you mean, as long as the reader has tasted a cream puff before.

Aw, I love this so much. You spend most of the poem praising this person, and in the last two lines you make it bittersweet as well. I like your hyphenated adjectives, like 'shy-gun' and 'heart-melt'.

Good. For once I'm not sure what else to say. I like your odd, italicized adjectives and the lack of capitalization. The last line made the poem sad, where before it wasn't.

my favorite part: you think you’re a
break-my-heart boy
with your shy-gun smile

I really love this.
good poem.

this is beautiful
iloveloveLOVE this so much
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I liked this, the truth and the degrading nature of it.

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love!

"it’s the way you lean that got me snared"

though I love the perfectperfect ending, that's my favorite line. I have a leaning fetish. boys have stupid torsos that curve so nicely when they lean.

so yeah, I totally love this in a squealy fan girl way. in case you couldn't tell. : P

I loved this. It reminds me so much of a poem I wrote a while back.

i love this.