This one was extremely interesting... with Eli dying and the inminent threat of the Church. I liked Holden in this one, he is so humane, insecure (in his way) and damaged. You have done a wonderful job portraying all your characters, even the secondary ones.

I like it but the end felt kind of rushed.

well the ending wasn't what i expected, though i'm happy to say it looks like their will be another continuation. i hope.

wow, eli's dead. that whole divine cat thing really came back to bite him in the **. i liked seeing Holden as a real person for once, he always seemed very unreal before. So i feel pretty pathetic just putting "wow" in all my reviews, but you know what i'm going to put it again, wow. the depth of the characters in this never fails to amaze me. it keeps me checking daily for updates, it amazes me how excited i get over a new chapter. So keep writing, please, your extrordinary at it. It's rare to see a such a worthwhile, unique story on a site full of discontinued, and 2 dimentional stories with such cliched plotlines.

wow, things suddenly got very confusing. cant wait for this explanation.

fictionpress stopped working yesterday so i couldnt read this until today. and yes, it was great, as usual.

once again i am left speechless good job i cant wait for the next chapter

he cant be back on the police force. that goes againt the majority of what he stands for.

good chapter though

holy...
roan lost it
and that part with paris almost made me cry
yes it still makes me sad too

im resisting the urge to start cheering wildly for roan now.

and the background information was a nice addition.

Sorry about the cliffhanger, but it felt like a natural chapter break, if that makes sense. But I'll be posting the next chapter as soon as possible.

i cant wait to see what happens next!
why with the cliffhanger?

if you do publish it i'll be the first to buy it

this is one of the best stories i've read...you really make your characters realistic. you make the whole story so real...like the virus could be a reality. the story really floored me with how well it was planned...like nothing was a rude spaz of the author's brain, every turn and twist of the story was so well put together- the emotions, the blunt look at life that is life- it seemed like realistic fiction. you really know your stuff.

so naturally...

i'm addicted to the story like Roan is addicted to Vicodin.

i'm not a super smart critic- so i can't give much more than that. i really enjoyed this series.

Yes!
you updated it
you have now made my day...month...year?..yes year
thank you