 Victoria Starr 2007-11-21 . chapter 2...
*speechless*
Wow. That was ... twisted. And dark. And EVERYTHING A HORROR STORY SHOULD BE!
It's ... I can't find any words to describe it. At the beginning I felt sorry for Melanie. Then when she killed her father I was like, you witch! And when she killed her sister, I tried to e-kick her.
But when she killed her baby ...
Well, just great job! Hope ya write more stories. |