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| Victoria Starr 2007-11-21 ch 2,  | abuse... *speechless* Wow. That was ... twisted. And dark. And EVERYTHING A HORROR STORY SHOULD BE! It's ... I can't find any words to describe it. At the beginning I felt sorry for Melanie. Then when she killed her father I was like, you witch! And when she killed her sister, I tried to e-kick her. But when she killed her baby ... Well, just great job! Hope ya write more stories. |