 madcat1030 2009-04-02 . chapter 17 Did you come up with that proverb? That's clever. I wish I had your kind of creativity. |
 born2ride22 2007-12-07 . chapter 1 the story is awsum! but long-stil good! i luv it so much im on chapter 5! |
 born2ride22 2007-11-28 . chapter 4 Wow, just finished the second chapter! ican't wait to find out wut happens to litney and trese! lots of suspense! |
 born2ride22 2007-11-25 . chapter 2 I love the beginning of the story. It was kind of mysterious and suspenseful-everything I love in a book! I'll read the rest tomorrow! |
 5starmom 2007-08-30 . chapter 1as always entertaining...so what happens next? right...gotta wait...now...how about now...fine! but I'll be checking back later!! |
 Casey Drake 2007-08-26 . chapter 1...wow.
:) CD |