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you_no_me 2008-03-13 . chapter 1
Wow! Loved this one. If I had an account here, I would place it on my favorite's list. Excellent write. I'm glad I looked you-up. I got your name from Needa S. Keep posting and God bless.
Needa S 2008-02-28 . chapter 1
Great flow. Beautifully done. Thanks for the great review and I do understand what you are saying. I will try and work a little harder on my pieces from here on out. Do keep writing. God Bless!
Vera-Sabe 2007-08-19 . chapter 1
Hey! Long time no speak...well, review. Whatever you want to call it, actually, lol.

Anyway, awesome poem. I just updated my account on here and decided to re-read some of your poems. This one in particular is so true. I'm a Christian myself so I couldn't agree with you more.

Your poem really outlines what I and most Christians go through in our every day lives. When I walk down the street, I think about God and Jesus all the time and I pray for the Holy Spirit to guide me and be with me throughout the day.

I guess what I'm saying is basically what you're saying: That we need God's spirit to help us not just in the good times, but in the bad as well.

Again, just awesome and fantastic as always. ^_^


~*~*~*Vera-Sabe~*~*~*
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