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| whispered something profoun... 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abusei like this. i don't think it needs anything. thank you for the review! |
| A Madman with a Pencil 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseIt's good. Kinda bleak...but I write like that sometimes, too. Missing something? Maybe...ellipses at the end of the last line? ;) Or perhaps you feel like you should add a line either before or after the last one. You could, of course, if you feel it improves the poem. --AMP |