Reviews for You Can't Hold On Forever

whispered something profoun... 2007-07-31 ch 1,	abusei like this. i don't think it needs anything. thank you for the review!
A Madman with a Pencil 2007-07-19 ch 1,	abuseIt's good. Kinda bleak...but I write like that sometimes, too. Missing something? Maybe...ellipses at the end of the last line? ;) Or perhaps you feel like you should add a line either before or after the last one. You could, of course, if you feel it improves the poem. --AMP