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Justin Webb 2008-06-19 . chapter 1
I tried to send you this through myspace, but I cannot send unless you are a friend, and I assume that you would not accept me so I figured I would try here. Also I like this poem.

I would first like to say that I am happy for you. He seems like a good dude.

secondly I would like to ask you if there is any possible way that you and I (someday mind you, not right away) can be friends.

I know that I hurt you, and I am sorry for that. I do however miss hanging out with you. before we were together we were good friends, and I think that just because we had/have some bad blood between us shouldnt mean that we cant be friends. It wasnt all bad, im sure we had a few good times no?

I dont expect that we be great friends right away. I just ask that you consider it.

I told Billy the same thing im telling you. It wasnt all bad times, things just didnt work out. Life, however, is too short to hold grudges.

I did a lot of soul searching being here in waterport with nothing to do.

Even if you still hate me atleast let me know something. either send me a message on my space saying "sure ill consider it," or "no you are a dickhead" will suffice. :)

Again sorry for posting here, but its the only way I could write you.
A little birdie once told me. 2007-08-31 . chapter 1
You know, a lot of times, when people stick to a rhyme scheme, it can sound kind of corny. But you did an AMAZING job of making this tragically beautiful and an interesting read. Excellent work!
Stella Grimshaw. 2007-07-21 . chapter 1
Honestly, I'm really not fond of rhyming poetry but I loved this.
Sophia Lee 2007-07-21 . chapter 1
wow . . . if linkin park makes you that depressed, maybe you shouldn't listen to them. and i agree, rain sucks. hope you keep writing! great poem, btw!

krystelvampire
SirScott 2007-07-19 . chapter 1
It's been raining here today too. The rain does sour the mood.
Keep writing.

~SirScott
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