The way you described Micholozo's dash to save the crystal prince was beautiful. Nothing else describes it.

I have been working my way down your list of stories and just had to finally review.

This is a really great idea, and I hope you run with it some more. I hated the idea that you broke up the original three tho, with Raph leaving to Beyond. The first chapter came across as a 3 Musketeers turned to Threesome sort of story.

Ben at least needs to have several lovers, he's such a nymph :P

Please finish his story, everyone else is pretty much paired off.

I have loved everything I've read so far. Thanks :)

A very interesting world!

*pout* boo no smut. please update soon.

D8 YOU SKIMPED OUT ON THE CRYSTAL PRINCE?

URK.

T_T I hate myself for loving your stories.

I...

like your smut very mucch...

_

and you were really clear with this chapter, so it's unlikely for any misunderstanding..?

8D

I've moved onto your other stories. I was getting agitated from wondering about the possible future for Cavan and Gair in 'The Black Fox'

Anyway,

HAHAHHAHA BUTTERFLYSEX?

Oh jesus this has so much smut potential LOLOL.

I just had a thought, would it disappoint you to see like four(?) reviews overnight and to only find out they're all from the same person?

... D8 I'm just slightly obsessed with you right now, that's a good thing though!

If you get reviews, do we get smut? *innocent smile*

This was a great interlude, though I'm missing Ben.

I hope you'll write more of this one day soon.

This is all very interesting. Very, very interesting... ;)

Very nice interlude, though I'm left wondering who Benvolio is shagging in the hallway while this wonderful scene is taking place. LOL

Bravo!

Man. Whore. LOL

Seriously, though. I so curious as to where all this is going. :)) I wish there was more to this story than what's posted...

I really like Benvolio, though he is a bit of a manwhore. LOL I'm trying to figure out who his significant other is going to be. :))

I'm liking this story way too much, especially since I know it's incomplete with no prospect of being completed. *sigh* The many travails of an original slash fantasy fan...

I love military stories. :)) Soldiers and butterflies are a new mix, however. I think I like. LOL

Bravo!

Very interesting beginning. Bravo!