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Kariz 2008-07-12 . chapter 8
D8 YOU SKIMPED OUT ON THE CRYSTAL PRINCE?!?

URK.

T_T I hate myself for loving your stories.
Kariz 2008-07-12 . chapter 6
I...

like your smut very mucch...

>_<

and you were really clear with this chapter, so it's unlikely for any misunderstanding..??

8D
Kariz 2008-07-12 . chapter 2
I've moved onto your other stories. I was getting agitated from wondering about the possible future for Cavan and Gair in 'The Black Fox'

Anyway,

HAHAHHAHA@BUTTERFLY+SEX?

Oh jesus this has so much smut potential LOLOL.

I just had a thought, would it disappoint you to see like four(?) reviews overnight and to only find out they're all from the same person?

... D8 I'm just slightly obsessed with you right now, that's a good thing though!!
gothicHobbit08 2008-07-11 . chapter 8
If you get reviews, do we get smut? *innocent smile*
tmelange1 2008-06-03 . chapter 8
This was a great interlude, though I'm missing Ben.

I hope you'll write more of this one day soon.
tmelange1 2008-06-03 . chapter 7
This is all very interesting. Very, very interesting... ;)
tmelange1 2008-06-03 . chapter 6
Very nice interlude, though I'm left wondering who Benvolio is shagging in the hallway while this wonderful scene is taking place. LOL

Bravo!
tmelange1 2008-06-03 . chapter 4
Man. Whore. LOL

Seriously, though. I so curious as to where all this is going. :)) I wish there was more to this story than what's posted...
tmelange1 2008-06-03 . chapter 3
I really like Benvolio, though he is a bit of a manwhore. LOL I'm trying to figure out who his significant other is going to be. :))

I'm liking this story way too much, especially since I know it's incomplete with no prospect of being completed. *sigh* The many travails of an original slash fantasy fan...
tmelange1 2008-06-03 . chapter 2
I love military stories. :)) Soldiers and butterflies are a new mix, however. I think I like. LOL

Bravo!
tmelange1 2008-06-03 . chapter 1
Very interesting beginning. Bravo!
chocolate-philosophy 2008-03-13 . chapter 8
How come we don't get smut? ;_;

Lovely series btw. Are we going to find out anytime soon what happened to Raphael and his freaky molesting dad? And that pairing just sounds wrong no matter what angle I think of it. >.>
x-princessa-temnoti-x 2008-03-12 . chapter 8
Fine, here's your review:

You suck. You write something like that and then tell us no smut? :pout: Shesh. :P
Paige Evans 2008-03-08 . chapter 8
I meant to review the first chapter, really, I did, but before I could hit 'submit review' I found myself pressing the arrow to the next chapter, and then it happened again, and again . . . And before I knew it I had reached the end.

This story is amazing. Amazing's too weak a word, but I can't think of a better one right now. I absolutely love your story, and although I know you said that it rarely gets updated I'll keep checking back, hoping for another chapter. I'm speechless right now, I've fallen in love with this story.

Keep up the great work.

Love,
W.S.
Rubadub 2008-03-08 . chapter 8
-pouts and whines-
Aw, but I like smut D:

I lawled at the part where the prince got a little too excited and started to crack. I suppose the humor of it might make up for the lack of a raunchy sex scene xD

It also liked the description when they were kissing and the prince's tongue/lips were cool and smooth.

-Nub
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