 tonight we bloom 2009-08-20 . chapter 12What a beautiful way to end this little collection! This has got to my favorite.
"Maybe I just dreamed you
but I can feel you in my bones." That line is stunning!
As is the last line, I could have those words running through my mind all day. |
 tonight we bloom 2009-08-20 . chapter 7I really like all of these little entries up to now. They are each so beautiful in their simplicity. You explain simple situations in really amazing ways that I'm sure a lot of people can realte to.
Keep it up!
I would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work; it would mean a lot to me! |
 Calliope Rae Marksbury 2008-08-06 . chapter 1i love that this doesn't seem manufactured. you're not telling yourself that you're sad and angry because that's what you think you're supposed to feel. these are real emotions, this is real loss.
and i'm sorry. |
 the big crunch 2007-12-29 . chapter 9i really like this,
tons,
:) |
 Everything to you 2007-09-18 . chapter 1short, very short. But you did get the point across so good job. I liked it.
Everything to you~ |
 the unreal 2007-07-19 . chapter 7wow. powerful, and good. i hope to read more of it... |