Not a lot going on but for a one-shot it's pretty good, especially the descriptions. :D And there were a lot of funny bits too. >3

You're a great writer, even when it comes to writing original fiction. 8D I wish I had your skill...

-Gide

That was so adorable! And, yes, that was my first reaction after reading the story. XD

I'm so happy that someone realizes that there can always be something funny about romantic situations like that. It's just that giddiness and happiness that makes you laugh. It's the love, right? The joy of being held, loved, and having something most people can only dream about.

The story was great, and I hope to see some more from you soon.

Love from your idiot,
Brandy

absolutely beautiful!! something I might attempt to write, but wouldn't be able to capture as you have. great job!!