Some of these chapters seriously seem like the epitomization of summer to me. Some seem more personal, and are still lovely. This is a great colloection!

I love this poem. I want to do this someday, except all my friends are "normal". *rolling eyes* Ah, well, then I shall go out alone. ;)

I think you have a lot of potential as a writer. Keep it up! I hope my reviews have amused/cheered you.

Ironic Presence

Yeah, this is a familiar feeling. I think you portrayed the emotions very well.

Ha ha, yes, no one can resist the authority of ice cream. I have to like this one 'cause it's about ice cream, and two of my favorite flavors, at that.

This one is pretty interesting. It took me a little while to figure out that you're talking about the moon (I think--am I right?). I like it--it's different and pretty creative.

I like this one. It's melancholy. Call me weird, but I like melancholy poems a lot. Keep it up.

Interesting...the cheesecake part in the beginning is interesting, but it doesn't connect to the rest of the poem.

I like this poem besides that.

I really, really, REALLY like this poem. It was vivid. Keep it up. :)

Hmm... interesting... I like your description of the sun setting. It was, if you don't mind my saying so, delicious. I could picture its beauty.
I think the window not rolling down was kind of weird, and then the hugging someone/something was a little incomplete, though. I don't really understand the restraint contributing to the feeling of being fully alive, and then you say something about hugging someone, but it's not really developed. I think the redeeming factor is defintely your description of the sun. ;) I don't think it's a bad poem at all, just a little rough.
I'll read the rest of your poems in the set.

Ok I need an explanation on everything. And mint chocolate chip is my favorite ice cream too.

beautiful imagery :]
nice work!

"but the window won’t roll down enough./Stupid child safety." Oh, that always ** the hell out of me too.

Anyhow, great poem. And thanks for the reviews, by the way!

Rowan.

That was a good piece of writing. And as always, explain...please.