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| haceloxmi 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseOMG Dani esta historia es hermosa!! te juro me encanto, los tios de Luciano no me caian bien hasta ahora!! De verdad... es tan dulce la historia, aww y el final y todo. Me hizo ver a la mama de Lu de manera diferente tambien! Como no tan estupida, sino q solo como q cansada de luchar. Jeje quedo muy buena! Besotes! |
| bambi4real 2007-07-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseAlright after reading the intro I knew immediately it was Lu and Rob's story. I thought it was great. there were some typos and grammatical issues but nothing too serious. I liked thier story it was really cute and realistic. I never did see the cheat with Nancy coming. I mean I thought it was weird they kissed on the lips not being related but I just assumed Lu was being paranoid. I guess he had great instincts. |
| The Intelligent Designer 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseOh I like this! It was beautiful...and I hated Lu for a few minutes in the middle there. Great Job! |
| magalina 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseAw, that really was cute. It was nice to seeLu´s past :D Great job! |
| My Chemical Music Box 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuse:) That was really good! I was almost crying at some points... It really comliments Profe and fills in some gaps! Good work! |