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| MarvellousMarvin 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abusethis was really lovely! the metaphors and the images wrere really awesome and i love your style of writing..the way it all flows into eachother kinda mocks the coninuity of the waves. really really nice! thanks for the reviews if i didnt already thank you! (sorry ive been away and lost track!) |
| AuraBorealis 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abusethat was so wonderful. it was probly the best i have ever read in a while. |
| cpneb 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseAnd, He looked down and smiled: Yes, you are, and, yes, you will be! I'm sorry for your loss; losing a close friend, no matter your age, is painful. I lost one of my closest 3 years ago, and I still miss her, but I have learned to praise and her good works and remember the good times we had together. This is a very nice work: not what I would have expected from the title, but not disappointing at all. Reach for the stars, and they shall, indeed, be yours. ...cpneb |