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| Vigilant 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Why? Because it reminds me of similar experiences, and there's nothing quite as nice as something you can relate to and smile about! |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseShort and simple, but well written. Kudos! |
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI love this. So simple, but you captured the emotion perfectly. The bracketed phrases add so much to the piece. |
| Faith Adeline 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuselol, I like this. It's simple and it says enough. It's good, and real. Keep it up! Faith |