 Anon 2007-08-06 . chapter 1 Lovely story, I liked the way you portrayed Storm as a average person, with the same problems that most of us face at one point in our lives. Impressive writing, by the way. |
 suzie 2007-07-21 . chapter 1 What do you know, I just read this in one go and now I have squinty eyes. (Internet stopped loading a long time ago, but it loaded your story. Is it fate? XD) Well, what am I supposed to say? I LOVED the first part, I LOVED how you wrote that. Kudos. *bows down to you* The story all in all is really good, and the idea is just too *sque*. I liked how you put "fangirlism" in too, very nicely explored. |