Continue..it..pleasse xD

Ohmygod.
Was that a car?

This is so beautifully written, the depth of the emotion is amazing.

Through such a short time, I felt like I knew the characters.

Is Zy a friend of yours, or a fictional character, because at the beginning I saw you wrote, "For Zy."

Also, I liked how he doesn't so "I love you" back, and how you made it obvious.

I really like what you wrote in the italics.

This is really meaningful and I think you wrote it beautifully.

Love.

kthnxbai,

Martin the Waterskier

T.T I really like how you use angst. Makes me feel like I'm in the situation again. I had my heart broken once and it's breaking again...

hey there..

Zy and Derek. they used to be together?
i like the way you wrote it.
it's really cool.

=)