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shola
2007-09-05
ch 1,
abuse"YOU wave weakly, and we push each other with equal force from our memories, off the sides of crooked mountains."

Thats a really great image.
I think I prefer other pieces of yours to this one, but there's still some fantastic parts to this
rust phoenix
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abuseI really like the style and the formatting to it, as well as the whole "in-the-moment" kind of style. Very poignant.
lucidspiritdreamer7
2007-07-20
ch 1,
abuseGood poem guilt is an awful thing. I'd like to hear more from you about this,who inspired it a friend you loved dearly I'm guessing.
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