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| shola 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abuse"YOU wave weakly, and we push each other with equal force from our memories, off the sides of crooked mountains." Thats a really great image. I think I prefer other pieces of yours to this one, but there's still some fantastic parts to this |
| rust phoenix 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseI really like the style and the formatting to it, as well as the whole "in-the-moment" kind of style. Very poignant. |
| lucidspiritdreamer7 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseGood poem guilt is an awful thing. I'd like to hear more from you about this,who inspired it a friend you loved dearly I'm guessing. |