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MoonBlues
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseI love the choice of words you used in this, the way you didn't let standard grammar restrict you. It really gave a great sense to the character of the person speaking, whomever they may be, and personified them in a way that otherwise may have been left for interpretation that could be misconstrued.
All in all, great work! I enjoyed it.

-Kim
Mercyclaw
2007-07-20
ch 1,
abuselol, beatd my poery!
Exodus.Escence Of Sin
2007-07-20
ch 1,
abuseI like it, lots of emotion throughout the piece. nice job!




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