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| MoonBlues 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI love the choice of words you used in this, the way you didn't let standard grammar restrict you. It really gave a great sense to the character of the person speaking, whomever they may be, and personified them in a way that otherwise may have been left for interpretation that could be misconstrued. All in all, great work! I enjoyed it. -Kim |
| Mercyclaw 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuselol, beatd my poery! |
| Exodus.Escence Of Sin 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI like it, lots of emotion throughout the piece. nice job! Parentheses - In - Eternity |