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| simpleplan13 2008-03-08 ch 1,  | abuseI like it... the rhyming is really nice.. and flows really well.. the question at the end was really awesome... PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile) |
| Kenna-Kat11 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abusewow that was amazing i loved it and i like the dedication awesome job very deep and true *faving* ~E~ |
| Dr. Colleen 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseOk, so why are you so good? This is really...*searching under couch pillows for right word*...powerful...*returns to searching for a better word, finds a penny*... I like it. Cheers, Colleen |
| LittleDoe 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseWow!... again I say WOW!!... I'm not usually left speechless, but this has left me so...it seemed so fancyful, as I was reading it, yet so true... I understood when I saw who it was dedicated to... yet I still think this poem could make a neat plot, or basis for a plot, for a fantacy story... Very well written! God bless you. ~LittleDoe |
| Adrienne Jones 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI am in awe! Your writing is way better than the junk we study in English. Please, sir, may I have some more? Really. I have tried so hard to rhyme and have failed horrendously always. How do you do it? I'm going to print this out and show it to my grandfather, who's a writer, and my mom, who is a poetry enthusiast. This is gold. -AJ |
| Night Silver's whisper 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI love this. This is my favorite form and style of peotry, and you nailed it on the nose! Your ryming and your flow was pretty, and you concluded it wonderfully. Night Silver's Whisper |