aww. this is really sweet. i like how the characters werent given names, like no identities really. because even if the reader had never been in a situation like that, it still seems relatable. really nice job.

WOW NONA. This is utterly AMAZING. I love it, love it. Seriously. I love it so much, guess what? I'm going to use an exclamation mark when I say...YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! This was deep and almost melodic. Her emotion was raw and beautiful. The feelings that she felt were so real. I could relate to it; it felt as if I was her and I knew him. It's poetic even though it's a short story. You are one of the best writers I've ever read. There are some authors who are published and don't write things as heartwrenching as this.

Favorite Lines:

"While you’re getting your little piece of Hollywood, are you alive or are you starting to fall asleep again?"

"That night, your eyes caught in midnight. You were at the climax of an old day, struggling whether to make the risk of starting a new beginning or not."

"I had always been pursuing you to take a chance. Not just with your music but with your life. With our lives. "

this is interesting. i like the way u write this. i also like the title. i'm a bit confused, but i'm going to reread this again so i won't be. i like it. i like it a lot. you told a story, w/o having to use dialogue. neway... this is good.

this story is...
i don't know how too describe it but it's good
i agree with what Night Silver's Whisper said about the summary

I haven't read this chapter yet, but I have to say, the summery was gorgeous.
Night Silver's Whisper