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| michael mcblack 2007-12-21 ch 1,  | abuseWearing. Me. Down. I really like your choices of which word to put on which line. |
| shadows of a trackless sea 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseI also liked this. It's amazing how you can create a meaningful message with such a small amount of words. |
| Needa S 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseAwesome write. Thank you for your kind review. |
| Nick Weisman 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abusenice metaphor, you painted it well. |
| Frames of Insight 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abusesimple yet significant :) I also liked the imagery. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseThat's really neat. I like it. A new perspective. Simple but beautiful. =] |