 Fractured Illusion 2007-07-22 . chapter 1Wow. Good one!
It surprises me though,that despite the fact that this friend (Amy?) seems to dislike her now fat friend so much, why does she visit? Forces herself?
That part made little sense, but overall it was intruiging. The fact that this is a darker kind of story makes me like it even more though ^^
(And I swear this site is effing up. I tried to click this title so many times and all it would say "Error, does not exist". Bwah! At last I got read it!)
Keep on writing! |