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| Black and White Dreams 2007-07-23 ch 1,  | abusea bit of this really is quite confusing, but i appreciate it because its how you felt. i like the ending especially. that last line "If I could start over, I would" sticks with the reader and helps them understand better how you felt. I like the idea of this and i hope you write more soon =] ~Black and White Dreams~ |
| angel953 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abusewow. im speechless... i understand slightly some of the questions you asked...i ask myself those same questions... life is confusing. and a whole lot of the time... IT SUX! but thats why we ((all your friends like me)) are here for you and will continue to be here for ya chica :) this was great..hope you write more like this...glad to see ur bak to FP :) ttyl ur bff, lizaliz |