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| Azena Kira 2008-04-14 ch 1,  | abuseOkay, first off, one thing that confused me a little was the first line. Why is As capitalized? I don't understand that and it's a bit confusing... I thought the second line rhyming thing was good. I really liked that. Overall it was a very good poem and I liked it. =D |
| Dark Kaze Ryuu 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseI can just imagine the scenes with these words. Other than that, it's a lovely piece =3 |
| hime1221 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseGreat! I love the poem. I know constructive crityicism is in high demand, but I have none to offer. It was really nice. Thank you for the spelendid poem! |
| Dante's Disciple 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseAn excellent, sweet flowing piece this. The rhyme scheme is one I love and wish I could use more often. The topic is also brilliant (dont we all love Dragons). Only nag was this one line "With Diamonds of cloud dew crusting their faces" I think it knocked the rhythm a bit, maybe it should be cut down a little. Other than that though as I said before, excellent work! |