"Looking into your Jupiter eyes" I love that...HOW did you come up with that...Jupiter eyes...beautiful. :]

"My book of love still blank pages" - perhaps pages blank

It got a bit emotional.

It's great to hear that it's all-good now. Guess there are always up and downs in things. That's why hopes are still around.

Cheers.

Really really good. I really enjoyed this one. Wrote more man! :D