Oh my god! WHY IS HE DYING!?

Humph. You seem to have a knack for starting fics, and then calling them "complete". Do I detect an interesting age-difference between Jeff and Damien? Looks like I'll never know.

Of course, maybe that's my fault for reading your shortest stories. Let's try a longer one.

Wow, inspiring...

Aw! How cute! Is this a oneshot?

I love how you threw some sarcasm in there with the dramatics! You wrote this very well, will this be a chapter fic? Will we find out what happened to Jeff? Hm ~

this story really gripped me... i don't know why. i guess i like tradgety, death-ish type stories. weird 0.o. but that's besides the point, i like your story. please update soon! your story interests me.

Ooh, me likes. Really, you always try different styles, I LOVE that. Keep it up!