I don't think I've ever read a poem in this kind of style before, and I really loved it. It took me a little bit to get used to it, but I really, really loved the descriptions and the style and the whole poem, so much that now I'm going to have to add it to my favorites. Good job!

this poem is wodnerful. i love the imagery and desciriptions in it. very dark and moving. 'then...you shattered into an infinite number of glass shards when i saw u that night...' its perfect seperated from everything else...i love it.

- Changed