WOW, I love it!

Lovin the story every second. :D

haha. u captured my personallity really well! with the new girl that is. but so far, tis an awesome story. welp, going to go finish it now=]

Encore! Encore! Can't wait for the sequel!

I have to go to class but i cant wait to read the rest. you are an awesome writer!

Oh! The two men gave me the chills! I'm loving the story!

I've only read one chapter so far and I'm hooked. You describe things so well. I can't wait to read more.

its over... i can't believe it. i want to thank you both for not quitting half way through. great ending by the way. have you guys decided what the sequel will be called? just so i can keep a look out for it.

AWW!! the next chapter is the last one?! no! but a sequel? then it may be okay... anyways, i hope bobby doesn't interfere too much with graduation plans...

hi!! sorry its been so long. i haven't had a chance to get on here lately. anyways, another great chapter! can't wait to see chase try to convince kira!!

Great ending point, great story and sweet characters :)
I like the plot idea.
I'm waiting to see what Kira's powers entail :P

SEQUAL!

That was a really good ending although i'm really sad bobby died :(
but start again soon

I lovey your story! Very intresting! Keep it up!

You better be!
I'd be seriously disappointed if you both didn't.