well, i like writing poetry, but i can never seem to get myself to read it. im glad i read this though. its like the epitome of every teenager picking the 'cool' kids over their best buddy. it seems a little choppy, but i like you show the guilt, and the fact that there is a conscience saying that you are sorry. Nicely done.

I really, really liked this. It totally gives off the feeling of what guilt is. Especially the last two stanzas. The last line was just so perfect. Wonderful job.

Wow. I actually connected with this. I can relate to it perfectly.