 LeoOsaka 2007-07-22 . chapter 1That's life. Remmber how we always said we'd never change? Heh, I guess we lied. Or at least thought it was possible to always be the people we were. We grew up and apart, and naturally were changed by people around us. Sometimes it isn't always bad to change. It makes it easier to look back on the past and think: "Man I use to be so different!" It provides us with pleasant memories even if we're not happy with how we are today. We'll never stop changing. How does that saying go?: 'the only thing that does change is change.'I think that's true ^^. As far as the technical areas of the poem, there were spots lacking a bit of flow, but it was an easy read and thought provoking. |
 concerto49 2007-07-22 . chapter 1Guess everyone questions their identity now and again and what they were doing here in this world.
"I've looked over the years gone past," - perhaps I've looked over the past years might sound better
"As I ponder, I search my mind," - searched
Anyhow, it was quite true and cool. Made me think for a moment. Cheers. |