Reviews for Nicholas Grean - FictionPress.com

DrownMySoul 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abuseAw, little bothers. Makes you just want to hug them...to death. sighs Sad, I don't have a little brother, I wish I had one so I could pick on him...bummer. This was hilarious!...and... MICKEY MOUSE IS SCARY! ^_^
Silver Moon Vampire 2008-03-13 ch 13,	abuseNot so bad, lovin' the last comment... or line whatever... I'm sleepy...~pouts~
xBlackSoul 2008-02-09 ch 13,	abuseLove it! Mwhahah, the ending after p.s. mwhaha, totally funny!
xBlackSoul 2008-02-05 ch 11,	abuseI'm going to read the cliffhanger and the happy ending chapter! just because I like to do that, hwhahahhahahha! update soon!
xBlackSoul 2008-02-05 ch 12, anon.	abuseoehh,, nicee chapters! I read the chapters and I liked it, the cliffhanger too :P update soon!!
Briana 2008-02-04 ch 2, anon.	abuseWow. I wonder what your favorite book series is...could it possibly be...The Mediator? Good story, but a little too similar plot to Suze's - moving, she's seeing ghosts, Nicholas is half Spanish...?
Abby Arons 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abusereveiw of chapter one: I thought it was a good start, I like the use of todays common vanacular, and the sarcasm and dialogue of the character is well developed. Few instances of "you're" versus "your" that could be addressed, (spell checker wouldn't catch this), but a good plot, and believable characters throughout. Well done ^.^ Can't wait to read chapter two.