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| 1Wanderer 2008-01-26 ch 1,  | abuseThat's so sad. I'm sorry. P.S. Thanks for the review |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseCreepy...Is it about euthanasia? Or is it about thinking that our lives are useless until we realised that we will be gone forever(...Grey sooty ash flakes). It's a very thought-provoking haiku. -C.N |
| Kissing Concrete 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abusereally really really creepy and ominous. almost like a really harsh wake up call for those of us who aren't out there living our lives, that it won't last forever and we'd better get a move on. i totally agree. i especially like the last line about believing in death. everything has always seemed so stable, and then all of a sudden, its gone and everything and one you thought you knew wasn't reliable anymore. i love this. *favs* |
| a silenced revolution 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseA cat that's past away and will be cremated? Otherwise, creepy... |