Hey! I really like this story, I was wondering if it might be okay with you if I print it and use it as an example for a girl I'm tutoring, I think it would really be a good learning tool :D

I knew it! I knew it! I knew it was Renatus!!

Woah! I wanna see who the man is! You've got me hooked!

No problem! I can't wait till the next chapter. I want to know what happened to the girl.

Wow. I absolutely love your writing style. I hope you update this story, because I'm curious to see how it turns out.