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Isca
2008-06-06
ch 1,
abuseIn the last two stanzas, you seemed to really come-into-your-own as a poet. Great imagery!
she smolders
2007-08-20
ch 1,
abuseThat's quite a transformation for one to take and I can feel the strength in your words.
ken.ya.love
2007-07-28
ch 1, anon.
abusethis is very good, fresh and new and original for you. i love the raw emotion. i think that i am familiar with this feeling, and you portray it very well.
the third stanza is gold, and the ending is fabulous darling. like, "ha! in your face!" but you know, more poetic.
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