Reading these few chapters of this story has been an amazing few hours.
I really love the course this story has gone through, and it seems so interesting.
I love how you twisted the original story to fit your own plot (ie, instead of losing her voice, she loses her legs).
I love how Arisa and Eiden interact, at the beginning they were always feuding, but now they've sort of warmed up to each other. It's cute.

:)

cool story! i really liked it!

this is a really great good wonderful story that i love and like a lot since i first started reading it your a very great author who wrote this really great good wonderful story.

So I know this story's already finished and everything, but I... Okay, I know that there's about a three percent chance of what I want happening to actually happen, but I can still hope, you know? I want the sorceress and Arisa to get together. Like, romantically. >_>

I don't know what i would've done if Eiden was actually dead - it really struck me. Which means you have written a beautiful story. Your original twist on a new plot instantly captivated me and your characters stole my heart. Please keep writing!

Emily is the Sea Sorceress, isn't she? I've had my suspicions for a while now.

I read this story long ago, and I really like your plot and the idea. And it's well written too. I like your names too - exotic, and unique.

Ri

i bet the witch has something to do with all this. Emily is pure evil. i hate her even more cuz she's all faking the sweetness; it's disgusting.

i like the idea of this story; it's very original. :-)

LOVED THIS!
Did not see the whole Emily / Alexandria thing coming!
Great work on the appropriation :D thoroughly enjoyed this!

Balls, Arisa found, were tedious, but romantic. Very romantic.

Ha ha okay maybe my mind is in the gutter, but I'm not sure if this was worded in an appropriate way. ;)

Didn't she say thank you, though? I clearly remember... when she was learning to walk!

I was all wrong, it wasn't a sad ending. I loved this story, and I'm glad I read it. And I love the choice of Zooey Deschanel as Arisa, I think she's so pretty! And I can't wait to watch her new movie '500 Days of Summer'. Don't stop writing, can't wait to read a published story of yours.

Nichloe

I had a huge feeling this story would end sadly, but I'll wait for the last chapter to see if it is sad. Arisa should use the trident to bring him back to life!

Nichloe

I feel so bad for Eiden, I think she should've told him about what the witch wants her to do. At least then he'll know why she doesn't want to be around him, to prevent herself from doing something awful.

Nichloe