Reviews for To Stay Below The Sea

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Izabel 2008-08-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseOH MY GOSH. I'm sorry I read this a while ago when it wasn't complete and I've been looking for it ever since. I forgot the name and the author and I'm so happy that I found it again!
sketchingaCYNiC 2008-08-20 ch 5,	abusewow. i fail at life. haha, i didn't knwo this was finished! oh well. i mean, if you still need a beta reader, i guess.. haha. oh. some problems: "it seems we’ll be spending some time together until I get to become human again, and I might as well get to know you." - uhh, don't you mean when she's a mermaid again? also, i'm confused about the setting... it's somewhat modern (disinfectant and such uses), but you also have this fantasy setting.. so why do they still have kingdoms and horses as transportation?
sketchingaCYNiC 2008-08-20 ch 4,	abuseahaha. wow. this is hilarious. very realistic how you made sure she didn't know how to walk though. and i kind of pictured ian to be an old man... hm. oh well. guess that didn't work out. maybe i'm thinking of robin hood? ah. well anyway. if you stil ldon't have a beta reader, send me an email. i'm a high school graduate, my name's angeline. i really like reading and editing papers, essays, novels, etc. i'm a grammar nazi too, and i hate spelling errors. hm. anyways, i'm just going to read the next few chapters, before i come off sounding weird.. okay? xD
sketchingaCYNiC 2008-08-20 ch 3,	abusewow, the sorceress is hilarious. eidan is hilarious. i love this story. i love you. (jk!) xD mm, some spelling errors. if you're still looking for a beta though... :] shoot me a pm, or something.
sketchingaCYNiC 2008-08-20 ch 2,	abuseHAHAHA WOW. this is a great story. oh man, wow. hahaha xD i love your sense of humor and the chemistry between arisa and eidan. lol. it's so... natural. there's no forced hatred like there usually is between immature teenage/high schooler stories. i like this! definitely going to read on for this. :] (ah, i hope you don't mind the review spam, hehe.)
shadowgirl618 2008-08-08 ch 26, anon.	abuseAw. I'm so sad this story is over! Sorry I didn't finish reading it until now! It's been super hectic lately! I really liked this story. It's definitely one of my all-time favorites. Also, the original little mermaid required the little mermaid to kill the prince, but the disney one didn't (probably because it was disney)... Anyway, loved the story. Looking forward to more from you. :)
gulistanlik 2008-08-06 ch 26,	abusesniffs This has come to an end. At first I was feeling depressed because I thought Eiden really is dead. But he's not! And yes, the ending is bittersweet, methinks? The mermaids are going to die off? But they don't deserve that! They deserve the discrimination, I don't understand why the humans think they're despicable people. Probably because they don't really know what/how they are? Just how it is in real life, sighs. Well, I absolutely enjoyed this fic, I'll tell you that. This is truly a fitting ending. It didn't seem the type to end with 'everything went happily ever after' if you catch my drift. =D Thank you for a such an enjoyable and wonderful fic! =D gulistanlik
MythCreatorWriter 2008-08-04 ch 26,	abuseThank you for your thank yous! I was always worried my comments were too harsh, but I tend to be rather blunt. I am so very glad that I could help a fellow writer out. That just makes me so very happy! I didn't think you killed Eiden off then I had second thoughts at the beginning of this chapter. But then I thought he might come back, because this was a pretty long epilogue. And I was right, but whow, girl, you had me worried! I thought the killing off the mermaids had something to do with modern day. I love how this story has some twists and was a happy ending, but not perfect, Disney ending, ya know? I just love this story. Wow, Arisa really grew up huh? And so did Eiden, and Lena and Ian went through the hellist time. Alexandria...she seemed to turn good a bit easy, but it made sense in the end. I thought she liked Eiden. I'm glad you didn't have her fall head-over-heels for him, that would be rather cheesy. I am so looking forward to your future stories. It's amazing how complex of a writer you are. I'm impressed. I am a bit sad about the Greek story not being here, but being published is even better! Still, if you could message me with some more detail about it...I'd really like to know.
xemeraldeyesx 2008-07-29 ch 26,	abuseJEEZ woman! give me a heart attack thinking he's not dead then he is then he isnt. LOVE the way this chapter was put together like that though. i kept thinking hey maybe arisa is dreaming that he scared her awake? i wanted to read the last sentence or paragraph JUST to make sure he was definitely alive! i need to go lie down now. alexandria and the queen got what they deserved though. :D and you're welcome. thanks for writing a super awesome story for me to review. i cant say im happy that this is all finished but this ending makes it better. i hate it when stories end the way i dont want them to and i have to make up a better ending in my head. it takes too much effort. anyway, YOU ROCK. and im sad your not posting that greek mythology story. i cant wait to read it when it's published though ;) i'll be looking out for it!! xx
Muffins 2008-07-29 ch 26, anon.	abuseGreat Job!
Written 2008-07-29 ch 26,	abuseYAY. That was soo incredibly awesome. Loved the beginning where they make the witch talk to leland although you TRICKY GIRL, I'd thought eiden had died! right after I felt assured that he was still alive! that was so mean. and then after that is he dead or not roller coaster, I was just overjoyed to see that he was REALLY alive. REALLY. ALIVE. haha. it was great. very nice ending to a wonderful story. I will def. read more of your stuff, once I'm not so jet lagged. (i just woke up and its 2 AM. who does that?) and yeah, talia! it's fun to start over, because I get to change and edit whatever I want :) I'm on chapter 4 already!
emotionless-stares 2008-07-28 ch 26,	abuseAh! Awesome. Cool ending.
Artemis of the Golden Apple 2008-07-28 ch 26,	abuseI love this ending! You had me pretty sad at the beginning of this chapter, though. I get what you mean about this being a prequel to modern day. I actually really liked the mention of overthrowing the royalty and such. But does that mean that this really takes place in Europe, or is it too ambiguous to assume that? I know what it's like to have to deal with needing a royal family of some sort, but not wanting to pick a real place and do actual research on what life would be like at that time. sigh I hate research.
XX-HEART 2008-07-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseYay this story is updated n complete (do the happy dance)
ChemicalxDisturbance 2008-07-28 ch 26,	abuseOh my gosh! that was like an emotional roller coaster ride! up and down! It was an amazing ending! i loved every moment of this story! can't wait to read the next chapter of He Said It Was the Greatest Love Story Ever Told! wow. long title! XD

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