|Reviews for To Stay Below The Sea|
| Guest 5/31/13 . chapter 23
When the hell will you let them have their happily ever after ?Lkdmvalkjd
| Secrets 5/31/13 . chapter 20
WTF?! Okay, I only have 2 explanations for this
1: the queen is possessed by the sorceress, i mean think about it. Why would the queen want the trident so much? Or why would she suddenly become such a grade A bitch right after the sorceress found out the the trident is above land?
2: the queen is a just an evil, conniving little bitch.
Yeah, I think the 1st one is more plausible.
And about Emily ...well do I really need to explain?
| Amme Lockheart 4/16/13 . chapter 26
I honestly read this all day long and couldn't stop because it was that good.
I'm doing my own little mermaid version but I doubt mine could top yours. I really think you should publish this someday. afterall, the original version doesn't have a copyright anymore. :)
| ant0006 3/6/13 . chapter 17
This is great, but can I just say - Eiden. Is giving me the shits. His whole doormat manner just annoys me.
But in all other ways this is a great story, and I love it :)
| BrownEyedCutie99 3/1/13 . chapter 26
EEEEEKKKK! I was looking for mermaid stories here and I found this one and it is the best mermaid story I have ever read! It is amazing! You are amazing! I LOVE it!
| Guest 2/28/13 . chapter 1
am i the only one who thinks that its trident,not triton(isnt he poseidons son in greek mythology?)
| Wickedforlife 2/28/13 . chapter 26
OMG OMG OMG OMG FIYERO FIYERO YERO YERO!
| Wickedforlife 2/27/13 . chapter 15
lol, I love her too. She totally is like the bratty girls at high school. That's the problem, they seem so nice and somehow make you look like the paraniod jealous one.
| Guest 1/28/13 . chapter 1
i love it
| theDollophead 1/9/13 . chapter 26
Love this lol :)
| HeadOverHeelsInHate 12/17/12 . chapter 26
Oooo! Awesome! I love this story! Eek! The ending was amazing, a real psyche out. This was well written and thought out.
Arisa and Eidan were so cute! And I like Alexandria's character, she was quite a complex and interesting antogonist. There aren't many antagonists like her on this site, well not thelat I've seen.
Oh, and just so you know, sometime in the last chapter, you wrote 'Arias' instead of 'Arisa'.
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki 12/1/12 . chapter 26
Finally finished this wonderful piece of work! I truly hope you never stop writing. You have such a knack for it. :)
| 3rd Bookworm 11/6/12 . chapter 26
Such an awesome story
| ShineX 10/29/12 . chapter 15
Why is she working so hard? If you're going the 'torture her till she stops' route you probably should have more fun with it :/
| ShineX 10/29/12 . chapter 14
hmmm, I can't see someone with her personality not just leaving at this point.