ahh i miss arisa & the prince. this chapter is too short. (

aw no, everything was going good too. this is an awesome chapter and i hope you update soon yah? it's kewl that you switched to the sorceress, too. can't wait for the next chap so hope ya update soon! _

Good! More romance that's what I want! Ugh, the was twisted to read, for several reasons. That sorceress is what I expected from her, evil and revengeful!

Um, Carrie Underwood, huh? Her songs are good, I just don't like them. I like the old Kelly Clarkson songs better, the new ones are too much like the old ones. Almost every single song is about a guy cheating, or leaving you!

o smap! i like the darkness of it, it fits.

Hm...I really like this chapter. We finally got the witch's point of view of what's happening on her side. _ Aiya, trouble is heading for Arisa. Update soon! D .-;

aww, i just started to like the sorceress until she said she'd kill Arisa

great chapter! disgusting *shudders* but great :D

yup... it's a quickie, alright... anyway, that daddy is sick! and please alleviate me from this curiosity of mine... I want to read the rest... (whines) :(

Oh the witch is evil. I like how you gave us her background, which kind of makes us feel for her, but then it still doesn' remove the fact that she's seeking revenge on every mermaid and wants to kill Arisa, too. I always imagined that Arisa's father would go to land, attack Arisa or something, and...yeah. Hehe. I guess I'll just have to see what happens, then! You always come up with better stuff than my imagination. Haha! Update soon!

I never thought of my name like that. I actually got it from the dorm i lived in my freshman year of college. Cool chapter, I like the witch,evil though she is. I hope she succeeds in getting the trident, just to get rid of the king.

hahaha. _ nice chappie.

wow, i like this beginning. nice job. _

Ooh, I definitely liked this chapter. It was different from all the other ones and I really got to get to know this sorceress! A lot happened in this chapter which is exciting. I can't wait for more.

/shad

aw... They going to get star-crossed soon I can feel it!

Update soon!

Yay! They made up! _ *evil grin* *sings* Arisa is falling in love, bwahaahhaha! Fall even deeper and don't come out! XD (Yes, I'm a weird person) .-;

Great chapter! I liked how you ended it - and I can't wait for the next chapter! Don't worry about length. I like short chapters AND long chapters.

/shad