Odd... I swear I already read this before... Maybe I just came across something similar. Not sure. Either way, this is interesting. I assume the scene is a lover's secret tryst. Not bad, and I actually do like the last line. :)

~Cirien Phoenix

P.S. Thank you so much for your review on "Sometimes I Dream At Night." I'm glad you really enjoyed it. Sorry it took me 2 months to return your review. :P

This is really cute. your stuff seems so dream-like.

i like it...

indeed, it's 'sonnet', and it's very good, I liked the title jeje

Don't know. Poetry isn't that hard.
It seemed more like a very short story than a poem to me. Why don't like the last line? Suppose, perhaps I might not either.
There was a few interesting points made.
Anyhow cheers.

its spelled 'sonnet' and good job for a first try.
--shookie