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Crayon Tyrant
2008-08-17
ch 21,
abuseI managed to confuse the crap out of myself thinking I'd skipped a chapter (or seven) when I first read this, then noticed what you'd said in the chapter before and was reassured in my ability to read chapters in order. :)

And how dare you leave me on a cliff-hanger that is two posts away from resolution. ;.; Here I was all bouncing in my seat, guessing and assuming and loving... and then it was over.

Update soon! Pretty please?
sga-kaz
2008-08-06
ch 21,
abuseI'm guessing it's an all grown up and cutie Taeosuke Nakashima? Nigel is lucky to have been dumped by Tory, he is coming over as a bit of a creep.
efphrim
2008-08-06
ch 21,
abuseOh God, dear, your killin' me. It just keeps getting better!
Rinkika
2008-08-06
ch 21,
abuseWOAH! After 8 years, they still haven't spoken to each other? How lame is that!? I know Nigel won't do it, so I'm counting on Aillen. He has to do something! Aww, he probably misses Nigel a bunch. And who in the world is this stranger!?

You should update soon so I don't have so many questions. Please and thank you!

~ R!N X0X0
Faith Adeline
2008-08-05
ch 21,
abuseI liked this chapter. If I were you, I'd put 8 years later at the top, cause I know I didn't remember haha. I was like, whoa, what's going on? haha. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith
Angelhacker
2008-08-05
ch 21,
abuseO! Nigel! Hopefully everything will be all right! Tory should just die slowly somewhere...
Roman C Lee
2008-08-05
ch 16,
abuseHaha, a wonderful bonding experience indeed. My mom wanted to do that with me too, whenever I wrote anything. But my dad, lol, he says he prefers not to know what type of perveted things I write about. *back to chapter* I DO NOT want Clair and Aillen to end up together *cries* ok, get a grip Roman *sobs* lol, I'm glad he finally let out all of his hurt *cheers* Go Aillen! . . . *blank look* I didn't mean to do it again; it just happened!
Roman C Lee
2008-08-05
ch 15,
abuseAoww, writers block *wince*. On a happier note, I'm actually really glad he made contact with his parents again; at least some healing will commence now, or SOMETHING will commence now. Aww, Abel! I LOVVEE him!! When he was talking, about how it makes him feel like he's not good enough when Nigel doesn't seem to care about his life and all that I was like *tear* "I love you Abel!" lol, this story is so fun, and I'm attatched to it like it's my wooby or something, hehe. *blank look* I did NOT just giggle like a little girl. *is in denial* No way . . . I didn't.
Roman C Lee
2008-08-05
ch 14,
abuseClair is freaking AWESOME! But I don't want her to get romantically involved with Aillen; I know it's selfish of me but I want him to end up with Nigel! *sobs* I want them to be happy together! But for some reason when Nigel kissed that other boy it didn't bother me, probably because Nigel had no intention of giving up on Aillen, and couldn't ever love anyone else romantically. See? I'm selfish. I just *sob* If they don't end up together I'm going to freakin DIE! *of cource I'm not realy going to die; don't take me seriously. I can be dramatic in times like these. But I will do some sort of emotional equivalent of dieing. It happened before with another story, but then there was a turnaround RIGHT before the end and I was saved! So all my dieing had been for nothing, because they WERE going to end up together in the end. I was SO happy, but kinda ** that the author killed me like that, lol*
Roman C Lee
2008-08-05
ch 13,
abuseNo, it wasn't a bad chapter at all! I loved it, just like all the others ^-^ See? I even gave you a smiley face! And I never do that because it somehow just feels way too stupid to put up for no good reason, lol. I understand who Tae is, I just don't know a lot about him. HOPEFULLY Nigel doesn't go too far, and HOPEFULLY Tae will stop him if he attemps to.
Roman C Lee
2008-08-05
ch 12,
abuseNow that I've gotten to whatever high level of addiction I'm at for this story, the chapters are starting to seem short for the first time; scary how perception can change everything. I have less and less patience after each chapter to leave a review because I just wanna hurry up and read MORE! lol, it's really fun to get this into a story, and I'm SO thankful that you wrote a this story because I love it so much! I'm glad that someone has noticed Aillen and put forth true effort to help him; you just never know how someone is going to react to the sort of secret he has to tell. But if he got to know her better he could probably get a sketchy idea of what her reaction might be, and if she could accept it.
Roman C Lee
2008-08-05
ch 11,
abuseAh! YES! RECOVERY! Go Nigel! Damn, I said I wasn't going to cheer like it was a football game anymore, didn't I? *wails* I just couldn't help it!! I LOVE Abel! He's so freaking awesome! He's just the sort of freind Nigel really needed, and needs.
Roman C Lee
2008-08-05
ch 10,
abusePoor AILLEN! *wails* I love you buddy! Hang in there! Everything'll be all right! *sniff* see? This is why I love your writing. *cheers* Go Aikida! lol, ok I wont do that anymore; I understand that this isn't a football game, lol.
Roman C Lee
2008-08-05
ch 9,
abuseOh, wow, this is intresting. He reacted and delt with his hurt differently that what I had first expected. Fun, fun! lol, poor guy, not able to enjoy sex anymore, or even get to sleep without reliving that evil night. Poor guy . . . *sniff* I just love him!
Roman C Lee
2008-08-05
ch 8,
abuseFantasic chapter. I would put an explanation point to that, but I'm kind of depresed right now, so even though I REALLY mean it, and there is a lot of enthusiasm whirling inside me, I just can't be OUTwardly enthusiastic right now; too involved in the story for that. Damn, Allien, gotta love that **.
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