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| AuthoressCharlie 2008-06-27 ch 17,  | abuse“Flight 708, nonstop to Vermont this is your first boarding call.” The toneless PA voice alerted him. If Tom got onto that plane without apologizing to Gabe and without admitting his feelings to his best friend, the girl that he’d loved for so many weeks, Tom was going to loose Gabe forever. “Flight 708 nonstop to Paris, this is your final boarding call.” Umm... I don't think that Paris and Vermont can be used interchangably. I liked it. The ending was kind of sappy for my taste but on a whole it was 4.5/5 stars. ~Charlie |
| claireponcherrii 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseme likie |
| Alice M. 2007-11-21 ch 17, anon. | abusei like the story but that last chap was so out of place. you rushed it and everything was jumbled. the feelings like sprouted out of thin air. good plot terrible exicution. i would've deleted this chap. this really sort of dissapoints me... it is a great ending... nut for a different story. it's like some one else wrote this. I don't mean to char your last chap but it didn't connect w/ the story. |
| EmotionalTrauma 2007-11-21 ch 7, | abuseGabe should end up with: (drumroll, yes I know this is your story, but still) Tom! -Biohazard |
| Dark Fever 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abusehaven't read it yet! but i will, lunch is going to end, and then classes start, so just ignore this review! it dont mean **! |
| under the bed 2007-11-03 ch 17, | abuseThat was beautiful. A little bit mushy, but I didn't really expect otherwise. Though, with an ending like that, I'm guessing there won't be a sequel, which is sad. Good work :) |
| Victoria Winstanley 2007-11-02 ch 17, | abuseYAY ... IM NUMBER 100 ... do i get an award or gift? ... lol anyways ... i love this story ... its so cool it was a bit confusing at times |
| writing.life.2.4 2007-11-02 ch 17, | abuseaw sweet little ending! its so happy! i am very proud,this story doesn't have any beating of children in it! hooray! lol. i luved it so much and i luv tom! yes i do... hm... great job! keep writing! (idk y i even say that cause i know you will!) |
| sweets555 2007-11-02 ch 17, | abuseoh. cheesy. i like it. |
| Undrahas 2007-11-02 ch 17, | abuseDoes a guy like Tom exist!? That not fair! Oh well, in a story I'm writing I made up a guy thats a girls dream of having! I love the ending! Oh my gosh that is so sweet, and loving! He came back for her! Oh my god I love this story! I love it so much! Undrahas |
| kemicalava 2007-11-02 ch 17, | abuseooh i love this story...its so sweet i love the ending... the part where her secret gets out is too short T_T i wanted to know more. other than that - one of the best stories on here.. |
| Black Viper 2007-11-02 ch 17, | abuseAWW!! Love this! So adorable!! |
| sweets555 2007-10-31 ch 16, | abusecute. im glad gabe is finally acting girly and happy. |
| Scorpiongurl324 2007-10-31 ch 16, | abuseAw! I loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! Do Gabe and Tom get together cause that would be awesome. And what is the thinng with Jennifer? -Kia |
| Undrahas 2007-10-31 ch 16, | abuseAw them leaving just makes it sad! Great chapter! i really hope you do a paring.. |