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| Snowy Moon 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseNice. I like the imagery. Disgrace and decay, fun fun. Keep it up. |
| Nagame 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseAnother reviewer has seen the only error in this, so I won't alert you to it again. Enjoyed this one! Especially liked the last lines: 'If you cannot see how clear things can be/ You need to open your eyes and learn to breathe' Gorgeous! |
| Leaves of Labefaction 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseI like how well this poem flows, and the idea. Your one error: 'It's came to my attention' I think you meant 'It has come to my attention'? |
| DorkMaster 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseGood job. Kind of speaks to a lot of people. |
| Exodus.Escence Of Sin 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abusevery nice one. very relateable too. confusion is a concern of mine with this poem , but that varies in some. nice one parentheses in eternity |
| TiReD oF tHiS bOrInG tOwN 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseit is really good. i like it |