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| Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseNice poem, I can relate. And great job rhyming! I always admire people who can pull off rhyming well without it sounding forced. ^_^ |
| silverscreen crush 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI love this one. I can relate, and this was beautifully written. |
| MantraMagazine 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abusePositively enchanting, I loved this poem. Ans so well can I identify! Thanks for posting |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abusetoo true... I am generally a very shy person (I may not seem like it on FP, but I really am) and your poem completely captured my feelings... sometimes I wish I could move to a different state, just to see if I could make myself be more social and not so shy... very well written! keep it up! ~Daughter of Music |
| purple x pen 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abusei can relate to this one, all too well, good job! |
| Moondog Dozier 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseExcellent slant on the word twist of "outspoken". The sincerity shines through well in this, as it is easily identifiable because nearly everyone has felt this way at one point in time. Good work. |
| Dreaming Chica 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseAbsoloutly amazing! You desicibed shyness so perfectly! wow! I found it so easy to relate to, you have a gift with words! Keep writing! ♥ Dreaming Chica♥ |
| sweets555 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abusei love it. i really truly do. very well written, and it practically sings to me right now. great job hun. sweets5 |
| Kneeling Glory 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseI love the (possible) play on words at the end. Good write, and ty for commenting on my work :) |
| 1st violin 22 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this poem. It totatally describes how I feel about being shy too. |
| Valesse 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseI know a lot of people (including myself) who have trouble walking that fine line between too shy and total socialite. Kudos on expressing that... awkward social balance beam as well as you did. This poem had wonderful rhyme scheme that didn't hinder the flow at all. (a feat in itself.) |