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| Aerodotus 2007-09-13 ch 12,  | abuseIt'll be interesting to see how it progresses with the threat having been carried out and Taanish ... incinerated. |
| Cru 2007-08-27 ch 12, | abuseBoom. Haha. BOOM. |
| Cru 2007-08-27 ch 5, | abuseWow... Ain't riots a hoot, man? Humans do more damage in fear and self-preservation than they do with purposeful attacks, don't they? A true writer notices this- I commend you. |
| Cru 2007-08-27 ch 4, | abuseIts going to be poison! Sorry, but its a day before school starts, so I'm getting back to readin all the updates in my e-mail. All 14. xD. And yes, Calvin and Hobbes is slowly making a comeback. |
| Cru 2007-08-03 ch 3, | abuseLOL Calvin and Hobbes is great. |
| Cru 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseI just love your combination of real-world events and utter terror. Thought, I must ocnfess, I kinda skipped to the bottom of this introduction. I need bloodshed * evil grin * |
| Cthulhu Is An Awesome God 2007-07-31 ch 6, | abuseA pretty good story, but maybe a little unrealistic. The American people are so apathetic that at this point they can't be bothered to vote. It would take something a lot worse than another country being invaded to make them rise up in arms. And after kicking evangilacle Bush out of office, why did America let itself get suckered to be ruled by Hitchens? Politics is mostly an extension of money-making, and if the corporatiosn don't back Hitchens, he won't even get nominated, its as simple as that. Also, a fundie probably wouldn't want to nuke a country and send all of their souls straight to hell when he could invade, convert them to Christianity and save their heathen souls. But I guess he is just threatening with his nukes. Otherwise, this a very good story and a fascinating read. I look forward to read more. |
| Aerodotus 2007-07-27 ch 3, | abuseLooks like a good start thus far, interesting to see what this future is like. Based on this, one might say the American Century is at or nearing it's end, but that's just based on the theocracy and the tightening of laws and whatnot. |
| sunny tuesday 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseGood, solid, promising beginning. Some of the wording seemed repetitive and a bit shaky, but it is a very good story so far. Good luck! s.t. |