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Well, I must say I enjoyed the scenery. As a science nerd I rolled my eyes a couple times but it was very well written nevertheless. You always do good at invoking emotion and creating beautiful landscapes and this time wasn't any different. Since I am so critical I was curious if you really meant that the skin was "rendered" by the winds or if you meant the skin was "rent" by the winds? Just curious. I like the word rent in that context though, I am partial. Have a good day. Wonderful story.

Superb! Absolutely superb! This is what will happen to humanity if we DON'T go into space, assuming we don't self-destruct first.

hey, this is pretty cool. i like scify things. awesome descriptons and stuff.