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AtlantisGirl12 2009-04-13 . chapter 14
This is really good, as usual! :) I can't wait for the next update.
Iccle Fairy 2008-07-02 . chapter 14
oh getting very exciting! hopefully you can do two stories at once?! ;p keep it up!
Iccle Fairy 2008-07-02 . chapter 13
oh brilliant chapter Jay! I just love the way you express emotions and be so descriptive through a character's thoughts! very impressed! felt a feeling of pride well up in me during sai's speech! go cliff tribe! heehee! time to kick some butt! ;) fran ~*~
Iccle Fairy 2008-07-02 . chapter 12
sorry its taken me so long to read this! your new chapter gave me a kick start! very exciting chapter!
maru 2008-07-01 . chapter 13
OMG! I nearly cry!
I LOVE this storyy!!
Please update the next chapter!
I'm dying heree!! X3
anyway, you're a great writer, and I love Sai!!
My favorite characterr ever!
You will continue the story right? *threatens with knife at hand*
Jk. but, really, I will be waiting for the next chapter!!
Lovee ya and Sai!! X3
buhh biie
Mr.M7 2008-03-15 . chapter 12
Oh, Snappers! Giving shock and a little cutesy Sai Kaymy moment. Very nice!
Dachande663-ff 2008-03-15 . chapter 12
Even though I've been enjoying I Am A Flyer, I've missed this story. A brilliant chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. Please keep on updating, this is a great story.
SuperTD 2007-12-24 . chapter 11
How is he alive? How? Update soon!
Iccle Fairy 2007-11-25 . chapter 11
ooh ahh!! such an exciting chapter! I thought Sai was dead?! Ahh! Is that really him? So very exciting! Well done you! Keep it up! Fran ~*~
SuperTD 2007-10-27 . chapter 10
No! Sai! No! No! No! NoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNo! How could you do this? You are so evil! There must be something that can save him, a big bouncy castle at the bottom?
Dachande663-ff 2007-10-25 . chapter 10
Woah, wasn't expecting that. This chapter was something else, tight, fast, just simply brilliant. Can't wait to see if Sai can recover from this. Keep on writing.
Mr.M7 2007-10-25 . chapter 10
Woah.
Just wait a friggin' second there,
did he just do what I think he did?
Woah.
Iccle Fairy 2007-10-25 . chapter 10
wow, that chapter was really stunning! but that better not be the end ;) really amazingly written. loved the way you wrote Sai's crazed thoughts! really fab, well done you! keep it up! fran ~*~
Iccle Fairy 2007-10-15 . chapter 9
fab chapter! really building up for some great action now! great stuff! can't wait to read more! keep it up and update soon! fran ~*~
Mr.M7 2007-10-14 . chapter 9
SO sory for not reveiwing, I'm not really that 'reliable'

This story is still great and getting better!
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